By: TOEFL consultant
The organization of an essay asking for an opinion would present below.
I agree that sex education in junior and senior high schools is worthwhile. | Opinion | |
Three reasons convince me that teaching sex education will lead students to choose the right life. | ||
The first, biologically, students have became adolescence instead of children again. | Reason 1 | |
For example, the girls have menstruated since 9 years old and boys have dreamed of making in love with girls. Lesson in biology or health class may be helpful. | Example/detail | |
Second, students have changed emotionally. | Reason 2 | |
When girls meet boys, they begin falling in love each other at the first sight. Girls have feelings that are different from the childhood. All the feelings are a time process to be understood. | Example/detail | |
Third, student often get sex education coming from informal sources. | Reason 3 | |
In addition to families, media and friends play the main roles in sex information. | Example/detail | |
To sum up, I believe that informal education, junior and senior high schools have to list sex education in their classes in order to introduce students the right ways. | Conclusion | |
Note:
Englishmen usually think in a straight line and connect each idea with the next paragraph.
References
J. Sharpe, Pamela. 2007. Pass Key to The TOEFL iBT: Sixth Edition. Binarupa Aksara: Indonesia.
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